Daybreak

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Daybreak
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I’m a 49 year old single mom who believes late is better than never.

  April 2023     1 year ago

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Choices

Frozen inside myself…i cannot breathe.
Blinded to the facts that i cannot see.
Living inside myself, i cannot feel.
This world around me, it cannot be real.
A fork in the road, which way do you take?
Right or wrong, these are the choices we...

– by Dawn Renee Hill

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Rat Race

Human race in a rat race.
Winner winner winner, first place.
Second place only saves face of being the first to lose.
More pride’s in the stride of the one left behind.
Cause he stayed, didn’t cave, didn’t stray, determined to see it through.
...

– by Dawn Renee Hill

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The Message

Awoken from a dream, I was covered in sweat.
With a pain in my heart, like i’d come back from death
I’d dreamt of torment and an insatiable need…
A longing, a hunger, and unable to breathe.
I was in a river of fire, all around me, disaster.
...

– by Dawn Renee Hill

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I’m Not Perfect

I know I’m not perfect.
Oh, how i wish i was.
Perfect in what you wanted
in all ways for you because....
My heart can’t get over you
and my mind can’t wrap around...
the idea that we’re not together
and that you don’t want me around.
It...

– by Dawn Renee Hill

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I DO remember! An example of compassion at it’s greatest. Thank you for your feedback. I’m new here….pleasure to meet you

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