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  February 2024     1 month ago

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The Cycle

The cycle bends but never breaks
unless the ground beneath it shakes,
and if it shakes, the people cry
for fear they’ll be crushed by the sky.

The cycle makes the allegory,
dictates what’s dealt to you and me,
and if you want a different...

by Thomas Roose

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This poem is so effective. I immediately ascribed a type of people/person to this poem - upon reading it I was surprised by its ambiguity, and that there was no mention of a particular place.

The metaphors are beautifully impactful. I felt as though I was having a story from someone’s life recounted to me.

It’s not trying to be too clever, it’s not trying to tell us what it’s about or how we should feel - that’s what I loved the most. There’s so much room for our own lives and the lives of others in this poem.
 

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