Analysis of O breath that whispers in my ear



O restless night that dawn may come
My beauty want I see
This aching heart
Is feeling stark
No longer fantasy

O love so strong it feels so long
Yet not in life met we
How is it sweet
We seem so close
Souls flame can only be

O come that day of loves sweet kiss
The shivers through me flow
And on that bed
I lay thee bare
My love for you will show

O breath that whispers in my ear
Rhythmic body sat on mine
Our lips do meet
Our hearts do greet
In love we do entwine

O love my sweet my souls best mate
Time marches endlessly
And in my heart
And in my mind
Forever you will be


Scheme XABXA XACXA XDXXD XECCE XABXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Metre 11011111 110111 1101 1101 110100 11111111 110111 1111 1111 111101 11111111 010111 0111 1111 111111 11110011 1010111 10111 10111 011101 11111111 110100 0011 0011 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 548
Words 123
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on July 13, 2021

Modified on April 20, 2023

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