Analysis of Mother, Let You Listen My Pleadings!



Mother, when you tell me
the story of the moon,
I keep my head in your lap
and find it very anon.

The proximity of you
provides me warmth and comfort
but I explore the moon
less warm and short.

When you tell me
the stories of princess and magicians,
I close my eyes
and wave the thread of colorful dreams.

You know mother,
I hide my face in fear
when you tell me about cannibals
and story of man-eating tiger!

But when I read
about brooks
I find it dry
in my books.

Mother, let me stay in fancy world!
Let me stay in dream!
I find the books
very dull and grim.


Scheme ABXB XXBX AXXX CXXC XDXD XXDX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 101111 010101 1111011 011101 0010011 0111010 110101 1101 1111 0101100010 1111 010111001 1110 111101 111101100 010111010 1111 011 1111 011 101110101 11101 1101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 568
Words 132
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by swarup on April 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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