Analysis of Sane

Joe Strickland 1986 (Hobbysville, SC)



If you feel invincible, well then
You're strong enough
To handle all of my affliction.
If you think I'm crazy, go ahead and laugh.
I've got evidence to prove I'm sane.

You can come around to fuck anytime.
I've got no plans, no place to go.
But please, don't hurt me with your arrows.
I'm barely holding on, as you're well aware.

Our love's been battered and bruised.
It's a wonder it's still alive at all.
But we keep holding on,
Refusing to acknowledge.
Afraid to just put it down.

Please, don't release the sky on me
Don't leave me here to suffer, unaided
If you go, I'll be lost
Broken, abandoned, turned to stone 


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010011 1101 110111010 11111010101 111001111 111011110 11111111 111111110 11010111101 10111001 1010110111 111101 0101010 0111111 11010111 1111110010 111111 10010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 623
Words 131
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 24, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on July 15, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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