Analysis of IF I COULD SEE YOU...

Barry Green Jr 1973 (Florida)



IF I COULD SEE YOU...

If I could see you again
One more time, one more day
Knowing it was the end,
What would I do and say?

Time keeps moving, still
Around the place you once stood
I can feel you there, still
So I live as I know you would

If I could see you once again
I'd tell you I am fine, strong
I survived the pain , and laugh again
And love you all along

I can almost see you smile...


Scheme X ABXB CDCD AEAE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111101 111111 101101 111101 11101 0101111 111111 11111111 11111101 1111111 101010101 011101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 394
Words 91
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Written on March 29, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on March 29, 2024

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