Analysis of Hymn For My Brother's Ordination

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow 1807 (Portland) – 1882 (Cambridge)



Christ to the young man said: 'Yet one thing more;
If thou wouldst perfect be,
Sell all thou hast and give it to the poor,
And come and follow me!'

Within this temple Christ again, unseen,
Those sacred words hath said,
And his invisible hands to-day have been
Laid on a young man's head.

And evermore beside him on his way
The unseen Christ shall move,
That he may lean upon his arm and say,
'Dost thou, dear Lord, approve?'

Beside him at the marriage feast shall be,
To make the scene more fair;
Beside him in the dark Gethsemane
Of pain and midnight prayer.

O holy trust! O endless sense of rest!
Like the beloved John
To lay his head upon the Saviour's breast,
And thus to journey on!


Scheme XAXA BCXC DEDE AFBF GHGH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101111111 111011 1111011101 010101 0111010101 110111 01010011111 110111 010011111 001111 1111011101 111101 0111010111 110111 0110011 11011 1101110111 10011 111101011 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 680
Words 134
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow was an American poet and educator whose works include "Paul Revere's Ride", The Song of Hiawatha, and Evangeline. more…

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