Analysis of The Blindman's Song

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



I am blind, you outsiders. It is a curse,
a contradiction, a tiresome farce,
and every day I despair.
I put my hand on the arm of my wife
(colorless hand on colorless sleeve)
and she walks me through empty air.

You push and shove and think that you've been
sounding different from stone against stone,
but you are mistaken: I alone
live and suffer and howl.
In me there is an endless outcry
and I can't tell what's crying, whether its my
broken heart or my bowels.

Are the tunes familiar? You don't sing them like this:
how could you understand?
Each morning the sunlight comes into your house,
and you welcome it as a friend.
And you know what it's like to see face-to-face;
and that tempts you to be kind.


Scheme XXAXXA XBBXCCX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101101 001001001 01001101 1111101111 100111001 01111101 110101111 1010011011 111010101 101001 01111101 01111101011 1011110 101010111111 11101 1100110111 01101101 01111111111 0111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 697
Words 135
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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