Analysis of A March In The Ranks, Hard-prest

Walt Whitman 1819 (West Hills) – 1892 (Camden)




   A MARCH in the ranks hard-prest, and the road unknown;
   A route through a heavy wood, with muffled steps in the darkness;
   Our army foil'd with loss severe, and the sullen remnant retreating;
   Till after midnight glimmer upon us, the lights of a dim-lighted
         building;
   We come to an open space in the woods, and halt by the dim-lighted
         building;
   'Tis a large old church at the crossing roads--'tis now an impromptu
         hospital;
   --Entering but for a minute, I see a sight beyond all the pictures
         and poems ever made:
   Shadows of deepest, deepest black, just lit by moving candles and
         lamps,
   And by one great pitchy torch, stationary, with wild red flame, and
         clouds of smoke;
   By these, crowds, groups of forms, vaguely I see, on the floor, some
         in the pews laid down;                                       10
   At my feet more distinctly, a soldier, a mere lad, in danger of
         bleeding to death, (he is shot in the abdomen;)
   I staunch the blood temporarily, (the youngster's face is white as a
         lily;)
   Then before I depart I sweep my eyes o'er the scene, fain to absorb
         it all;
   Faces, varieties, postures beyond description, most in obscurity,
         some of them dead;
   Surgeons operating, attendants holding lights, the smell of ether,
         the odor of blood;
   The crowd, O the crowd of the bloody forms of soldiers--the yard
         outside also fill'd;
   Some on the bare ground, some on planks or stretchers, some in the
         death-spasm sweating;
   An occasional scream or cry, the doctor's shouted orders or calls;
   The glisten of the little steel instruments catching the glint of the
         torches;
   These I resume as I chant--I see again the forms, I smell the
         odor;                                                        20
   Then hear outside the orders given, Fall in, my men, Fall in;
   But first I bend to the dying lad--his eyes open--a half-smile gives
         he me;
   Then the eyes close, calmly close, and I speed forth to the darkness,
   Resuming, marching, ever in darkness marching, on in the ranks,
   The unknown road still marching.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010011100101 011010111010010 101011101001010010 1101100110110110 10 11111010010110110 10 1011110101111010 10 100110101101011010 010101 111010111110100 1 01111110011110 111 11111110111011 00111 11110100100110101 101111100010 1101010001011110 10 101101111110011101 11 1001001001010100100 1111 1010001010101110 01011 011011010111001 11101 11011111110100 11010 10100111010101011 01010101100100110 10 1101111110101110 10 111101010101110 11111010111100111 11 101110101111010 0101010010101001 0011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,181
Words 339
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 42
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,464
Words per stanza (avg) 428
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:43 min read
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Walt Whitman

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