My efforts echo
my efforts echo
they dont echo back
they exist, but no one is there to return them
they arent empty, but they bellow
my heart is full
but no one is there to see it
my heart is mended
but no one is there to hold it
change is made
but there is no change
i wont look in the rearview mirror
i wont look to the side of the road
i will look at the sunrise
and the road ahead
About this poem
I used to write poetry as a hobby when I was younger, and recently decided to try again now. This is the first attempt. The poem comes from feeling an intense emotion and needing to release it
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Submitted by kimg.86933 on August 16, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A X X A X B X B X X X X X X |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 355 |
Words | 81 |
Stanzas | 14 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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