the day i met her



When I first met you
My heart was filled with sudden joy
I can recall when our sights first collapsed
I saw myself in a different world
A world full of flowers and starts
I remember you smiling at me
One would think that we knew each other for long
That very day felt like holding you on my arm
That very day I felt like my life has changed
Since I never lived like this before
The day was like God had brought me a new savior
That day I felt my difficult queries were answered
I remember the day you said Hi to me
Wow the voice was like a singing bird
Your eyes were shinning like stars
Thinking about you made me have sleepless nights
Till then I went down to my knees saying, will you......

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I wrote this poem to my beautiful lady. who has made my life change since I met her. she really inspires me more

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Written on June 20, 2022

Submitted by Ochiengn875 on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLFLMNA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 701
Words 146
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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