My universe
My universe
Where the galaxy wasn’t full of stars
Where the moon and earth didn’t have gravity
A place where it was empty
A place which was bit destroyed by wars
My universe
Where the water was too cold
Where raindrops evaporated way too fast
A place with melancholy and despair
A place where the end had to fold
My universe
Where wind blew yet not being breeze
Where birds tried to sing but couldn’t
A place too dry, for a beautiful snowflake
A place too barren, for the existence of mighty seas
My universe
At the end it was the only home I had
At the end I had to embrace the empty
When the breathing stops, and heart rests
When I finally sleep, too tired of being sad
About this poem
The poem is about the melancholy a person been through, when they expect their world to be bright and to find that what they actually encounter.
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Written on October 16, 2022
Submitted by asmitastudents on October 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | Axbbx Acxxc Adbxd Aebxe |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 696 |
Words | 148 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 5 |
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