When I write - Sometimes
Whenever my hand reaches for a pen,
my soul solemnly leaves my body
and my mind starts its own imagination.
Whenever I attempt writing about love,
my consciousness reminds me of all the hurt
and bruises it left me with.
Whenever I try to speak to my heart,
she turns her face away and pretends I'm
talking to myself. She says I can do better.
Whenever I look at my wrists,
I remember how I carved too sharp one night
and I felt into deep sleep. I thought I was dying.
When I write, sometimes I'm alive.
On some days, I die while scripting
to only wake up bleeding.
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Written on October 05, 2022
Submitted by mokhahlanekeitumetse on October 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 576 |
Words | 127 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
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