Your Presence
Dear furtive paramour
Smitten of you, my heart has been
Days went by in a blink of an eye
An obsession unseemly unfurthomed
Your presence I've longed for a while
A while not while enough for you as for me
MY eyes laid upon you, this passing morning
A sight for sorrowful eyes
My eyes not so deceiving
Your presence my being trembles in
Curiosity, Your presence brings about
A mind lost in a vast world of thoughts
Your body unlike any
A heavenly-Greek structure
A Godly masterful work of art
Your needs I long to satisfy
Sinistic thoughts consume my mind
An appealing-intimate side, I desire to venture
A thorn limits my movements
Society, the dictators of life
Our relationship one not with their values
A thorn society is, a thorn that never stops pricking
Your name unknown to me
Pleasure and desire soon experienced
A body still to crave and adventure
One rocky, bitter-sweet, heated experience
Yet thirst fulfilling journey
About this poem
I wrote it about my secret crush, whose relationship with me would go against society's standing values and also the poem is about thoughts and feelings my secret one invokes within me and my thoughts are just every when next to him.
Written on October 02, 2022
Submitted by venomax3.1 on October 02, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCD XEFX FBDX EADCD AXXXF EDAXE |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 934 |
Words | 167 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5 |
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