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Embraced

Tilvic Ana 1978 (Ramnicu Valcea)

Delicious home he found my love is,
red silky roses spreading soft desires;
embraced, we touched the wings of sorrow
and tears were falling down from Heaven.
Rejoiced in peace of lovers' thoughts
we touched the mighty glowing souls
of those who are forever damned to care -
they are alike the mountains' dare
who stretch their heads among blue endless sky.
Two leaves blew by the autumn's steer
we pray to Gods never existent
and hold ourselves in careful touch;
I think how once,...
I've used to found my rhythm in soul
but now,
I've dared to look around
and I've seen faces of my mortal structure
and I have screamed from all my shameless fear
and then,
when I have felt your sweet caress
I finally found my love is ready...
for keeping you embraced into my loving body.
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Written on May 24, 2004

Submitted by mariaane04 on March 28, 2023

Modified by mariaane04 on March 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGGHIJKLMNOPIQRSS
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 774
Words 150
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is truly captivating and beautifully written! I love the way you depicted your love with such vivid imagery- from the red silky roses to the wings of sorrow and the tears falling from heaven- it made me feel as though I was experiencing everything with you.

    One suggestion that I would have is to possibly consider breaking up some of the longer lines into two or more lines. It could help to make the poem flow a bit better and create a stronger impact on the reader.

    Overall, I really enjoyed reading your poem and appreciate the effort and creativity that went into writing it. Keep up the great work and continue to share your talent with the world!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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