I love you, -blank-!
It’s a new place for me,
A new road that I seek,
A lost inspiration,
An ongoing dream,
I’ll be there at the station
To catch the train...I’m in!
Fresh smell of washed curtains,
They’re hanging in the wind,
A splash of last year’s mosquitoes,
And those sparkles of the nonstop pain.
I hold the notebook like a child’s forehead;
Or perhaps a man’s?
A lover? My lover?
I wish I could know.
The only feelings I know about, are mine; but they’re not certain yet.
I am familiar with the feelings I express for my present loves. The ones I live with;
I don’t know you yet though.
My dad’s in pain,
But God helps out,
My mom’s in pain,
Dad needs to heal,
My grandma & I are neutrals,
But in pain too.
Oh if you could just feel it too...
About this poem
This is a poem about pain, sorrow, fear of losing my dad through a very long and sad period of time in my life. It represents me, seeking for someone, a partener that could rescue me from those dark times.
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Written on August 10, 2023
Submitted by ionita.roxana05 on August 10, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXAXAX XXXB XXXCXXCBXBXXDD |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 752 |
Words | 168 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 4, 14 |
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