remember

beck 1776 (america)



You were there
When we walked down your street
But still ended up
In the grass at that park
Together, without a care

You were there
When we scurried our feet
Down the basement stairs
Leaving the TV off
Together, without a care

You were there
When I asked you to eat
At your favorite place
You gave me your drawing
Together, without a care

You were there
As you made me complete
Tickled my buzzcut
And told me you loved me
Together, without a care

You were there
Today.
And you didn’t look.
Did you forget?

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Written on October 11, 2023

Submitted by fart_smeller68 on October 11, 2023

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Scheme AbxxA AbxxA AbxxA AbbxA Axxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 511
Words 103
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 4

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