Do you remember?



Do you remember,
All those happy nights we had were we would watch the stars fade into black
Do you remember,
All those early mornings were we would bathe in the glory of the sun until it was boring
Do you remember,
Running freely in the glistening snow,as the crunch beneath us wouldn’t let us go
Do you remember,
The late night walks,when the air was thick and heavy as if to warn us that we weren’t ready
Do you remember,
The day I became sad,but not to the point where it was to bad
Do you remember,
The first night we felt so hopeless,like the world was crumbling below us
Do you remember,
When we said we were okay but little did anyone know,we thought that day was going to be our last day

To the inner child that is locked inside of me I just wanted to let you know.
this isn’t what you deserved to see.
through all these dark helpless nights,you were trying to shine a light and that I can see
And sometimes through the darkest nights,I would look back on the fun we had and remember you were the light.
But little me,you are no longer there are you ?
You’ve moved on now to somewhere far forgotten

-SL
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Written on December 15, 2023

Submitted by Sonny.lyness49 on December 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AxAxAbAcAxAxAx bccxxx
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,123
Words 237
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 6

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