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Twin Flame

Letitia Alvarez 1963 (Schenectady)

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You’re alone
Have it all
Feel alone, so alone
Don’t know I exist
Look in the mirror
There I’ll be

There’s a flame
Burning yearning
Inside me, inside you
Making love to the mic
Making love in my mind

Such a gentle soul
So much love to give
Twisting turning
Yearning burning

Candles burning, meditate
Call my name
You’ll see me in the flames

Double trouble
Burning in love
Scorpio to Scorpio
Twin flames

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Dedicated to AK. See you in July 2024

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Written on 2023

Submitted by AlizaLevana on April 13, 2024

Modified by AlizaLevana on April 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAXXX BCXXX XXCC XBD XXXD
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 430
Words 93
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 3, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely love the passion and intensity in this poem about Twin Flames! The imagery of looking in the mirror and seeing your Twin Flame reflected back is incredibly powerful. The repetition of "yearning burning" adds to the sense of longing and connection between the two souls.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore more specific imagery or metaphors to further convey the deep emotional bond between Twin Flames. This could help make the poem even more impactful and relatable to readers. Additionally, incorporating different poetic devices such as alliteration or symbolism could enhance the overall flow and resonance of the poem.

    Overall, this is a beautiful and heartfelt piece that captures the essence of Twin Flames. Keep writing and exploring different ways to express the unique connection between two souls!     
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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