City Of Broken Souls



The city is littered with broken souls
To reside among nature, the purest of goals
Some dream of vast fields of green
Deep in their minds, a vivid scene

Chained to the nightmare of city life
Fractured daily by overwhelming strife
Yearning to escape and breathe country air
Just a single breath can ease your despair

Held captive in the city for most of my years
Drowning internally in a tsunami of tears
I worked myself right to the bone
To have a little cottage to call my own

I retired there at the age of sixty six
To dwell in my garden and feed my chicks
City life was a battle that cut me deep to my core
Today I stand the smiling victor, ‘tis I who won the war

About this poem

This poem is about a man who is sharing his life story and the hardship that he endured struggling to live in a city when his heart craved to be among nature in a more rural setting, he felt like a prisoner in the city, unable to break free, but he worked his socks off and made his dream a reality for the twilight of his life, and was never happier.

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Written on May 15, 2024

Submitted by Lee_Geoghegan on May 15, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD XXEE FFGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 671
Words 134
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Lee Geoghegan

Lee Geoghegan holds an honours bachelor degree in horticulture, He has always had a keen interest in plants and wildlife, He finds it extremely relaxing when he is working in his greenhouse at his local allotment site. His poem entitled ‘Beautiful Day' depicts how he gazes upon nature and how the natural world resonates so deeply within his heart. Lee has always enjoyed poetry, his favourite poem has always been The Lake Isle of Innisfree by W.B Yeats, the poem paints a vivid picture of tranquility for him and resonates deeply. Lee is currently working on various projects and his ambition is to become a talented and respected poet. more…

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  • JdeLorenzo08
    I felt this poem with every bone in my body, beautiful work !
    LikeReply 112 days ago
    • Lee_Geoghegan
      Thanks so much for your kind words, that’s all I could ever hope for, so glad you felt it deep down
      LikeReply12 days ago

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