The Ocean of Tears



She felt the moisture at her feet,
But hope is sometimes incomplete.
She did not truly notice it,
As water slowly filled the "pit".

Her lonely tears had risen too,
Above each worn-out leather shoe.
But still, she didn't notice all
Collected tears that did still fall.

The tearful level rose and rose,
Thus, killing chances she'd repose
Within the ocean of her fears.
She never learned to swim through tears!

About this poem

Sometimes tears dry very slowly!

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Written on May 18, 2024

Submitted by stevec.24118 on May 18, 2024

Modified by stevec.24118 on May 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 410
Words 83
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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