Tingling feeling takes me over



breathing in and out
almost erotic atmosphere
his hand is on my body
intertwined with mine
heart keeps beating faster
I can feel the pounding

underneath the blanket
stroking firm movements
one sigh and the other moan
rush down my spine
tingling feeling takes me over

wrapped up together
breathing in deeply
just like we're one
stroking fingers,
touching my lips

he is lying next to me
nothing has hit me as hard,
like you,
the strong and masculine body
forever in my dreams
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Characters 453
Words 84
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 5

darkhaze

I'm an IT student studying Software Engineering on full-time. On my free time I love to write poetry, sing and play computer games. I find inspiration in everything and I write at any time of the day, when I need to let emotions float and be free from my inner self. I'm also an aspiring model, to-become writer and a song-writer. more…

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