Talygarza's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by talygarza — There are currently 140 comments total.

	I liked how the poem is focused in this flower awaking in me as a reader curiosity to your imagery. 3 hours ago	View
	ok 3 days ago	View
	Although is quite terrible the spectator fate, the pawn metaphor is poetically very attractive, getting an image you put on here. 3 days ago	View
	The cohesion on the description of affective liaisons gives the poem a message of consideration with others feelings very needed in toughs moments, often we take intimacy as granted, and for me is a social construction. more » 4 days ago	View
	Congrats, moving meditation, just I’m reading a book related with environmental change so this poem projects all this stuff related with climate issues, social media and how that shape our lives. 5 days ago	View
	Nice comparative between old and young ages, poetic humorous, accepting the facts. 5 days ago	View
	This poem approach mental health issues with simplicity and realism. 5 days ago	View
	Poem expressing the human longing to make a living without restrictions, is a good attitude to better life. 6 days ago	View
	I love poppies too, I enjoy a lot seeing them everywhere, and products related with them. This poem is a very heartwarming expression. 6 days ago	View
	“Little log cabins with their candles glowing”, great sentence on here, of course trees are excellent metaphors. 6 days ago	View
	The poetic narrative is made from coherent description of cosmical phenomena, adding a feeling of acceptance with man position in the universe. 8 days ago	View
	Keep focused in present rewards, well poem, underline a mindfulness vision. 8 days ago	View
	thank you, the title deceived means that the appearance of things can’t undermine your true value, that’s the message on the last stanza. Cheers. 8 days ago	View
	I see, of course is terrible, however poetry helps with optimism. Good luck!!! 9 days ago	View
	Touching piece describing the progress of a person that is loved, beliefs and divine glimpses add cohesion to close well and get attention. 9 days ago	View
	Thanks for your generous appreciation of my poem. Greetings!!!! 9 days ago	View
	Poignant meditation, I feel is sad. 10 days ago	View
	The creative metaphor you chose for relationship issues across the poem is challenging. 11 days ago	View
	of course, hope to read poems by you soon. 11 days ago	View
	Composition expressing empathy feelings for people involved in armed conflicts, and the suffer raised when victims are a devastating outcome. Congrats. 12 days ago	View
	The description of the excited environment of friends in a country fair tells the memories which anybody can identify themselves and makes this poem touching. 12 days ago	View
	Poetic reminder to be present and mindful as human beings we are so exposed to noise and unpleasant signs that is hard to keep focused and breathing is a sign of that. 13 days ago	View
	Congrats, the poem enlightens since the point of view of Paris his difficult feelings. 16 days ago	View
	This poem is beautiful captures an entire feeling for trees. 17 days ago	View
	Loneliness is creative just for writing. Well done. 17 days ago	View