You say you wouldnt make me your world,
And a tear comes to my eye,
Because I would give my life for you,
After all Ive already given my life to you,

It takes the strength of ten men,
After you tell me your busy and you dont want to talk to me,
To keep me from wrecking this peacefull world,
That I am so discontent with,

I cant help but feel like my love for you is unrequited,
I believe that you do love me,
But theres so many different kinds of love,
And my kind and your kind dont like each other,

I remember when you were just happy being with me,
When we loved each other deeply,
And when we were together,
People would tell us we were cute together,

An older couple took a picture of us in a restuarant,
And they couldnt stop smiling,
Because them seeing us together,
We made them happy,

Now were not even happy,
And I fall to my knees begging god to make you love me,
But not even he can make you love me,
All I know is no matter what Ill be here loving you,

Ill carry the world for you,
If only you'll walk beside me and keep me company,
Because you are my world,
And without you I am nothing

It's hard for me to think that you wrote that....and that sounds bad but i mean it in a good way.
This poem is a completely different style than the rest of yours but I really like it. I can tell that you were really hurt and I can almost hear you saying it....
Keep writing like this!!!

I can relate to this poem I recently lost the love of my life he just came and told me he didn't want me anymore reading poems like this remind me that I am not the only one going through this. I still want him to love me but you can't force someone to love you if they don't!

Hmm lets see I can relate recently to this poem too....*ponder*

The reason for the rarity of my poems lately is because I havent just been crancking them out left and write, so when I do write I write with my heart. And I think thats something Ive been afraid to use in the past because of the fear of getting hurt. Yes all you ladies out there, guys can get hurt to.

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I cant help but feel like my love for you is unrequited, I believe that you do love me, But theres so many different kinds of love, And my kind and your kind dont like each other

this for me made the entire poem...i loved this piece...this is my type of poetry...not to deep but so genuine you can't ignore...good work

Thank you I remember as I was writing this I liked it alot. Im glad to see that you enjoyed it. Your comment is much appreciated.

Just saw this poem...very heartfelt. I like it a lot.

Im glad to hear that.

this was sad but it came from your heart and that is what made it so great...i really like this piece...men do hurt as do women and you have put that pain into words that made this poem work...great job!