Analysis of You Took Me

John Mccullough 1968 (Philadelphia)



You took all I had 2 give.
My heart  my breath  
My love my soul
Now I stand outside
Soaked from the rain
As the pain tears my heart apart
You Took Me
I was your fool
Your court jester
Your puppet on a string of gold
Why did you do me this way
Was I so wrong to you
What did I do to deserve
This misery that you have inflected on my soul
This is the finally outcome
You Took Me Mary Tisdale.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111 1111 11111 1101 10111101 111 1111 1110 11010111 1111111 111111 1111101 1100111010111 1101001 1111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 382
Words 85
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 302
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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