Analysis of At The Altar



Tongues of flame sizzle against flesh
Lick and flicker ravenously
Her spirit gentle as the breath
Of a shadow on the sea

From a fog, a smoky whisper
In the ear, a kiss from a dove
Sweet scents of senses, smoke ascends
Spirits rise from flames of love

Am I your soul's burning desire,
Or am I just another freak?
Are you my only own true love,
Or just the Goddess of the Week?
I sacrifice me on my knees,
Eager to please, pray please, just to see ya,
Charred remains of burnt offerings
On the altar of the Goddess Maria

Wingless tributes, twisted wreckage;
Hear the howl as sirens sing
Broken angels scattered in pieces,
The despair of prayer on the wing

With crossbows around the bonfire
Dining upon fine fragile wings
Plucked from angels in mid-flight
Godlings snack to the crackling

Am I your soul's burning desire,
Or am I just another freak?
Are you my only own true love,
Or just the Goddess of the Week?
I sacrifice me on my knees,
Eager to please, pray please, just to see ya,
Charred remains of burnt offerings
On the altar of the Goddess Maria

A witches' brew is angel stew
Chicken soup for the tortured soul
Angel stew is a witches' brew
Chicken soup for the twisted soul

Consume this flesh, Ave Maria
The feast delivers me to your needs
Baptism by cleansing fire this
Disease which brings me to your knees

Ceremonial blood sprinkled in service
Cleanses within all which is sick
Served up to you, a sacrament
Little heart samples on toothpicks

Am I your soul's burning desire,
Or am I just another freak?
Are you my only own true love,
Or just the Goddess of the Week?
I sacrifice me on my knees,
Eager to please, pray please, just to see ya,
Charred remains of burnt offerings
On the altar of the Goddess Maria

Our Lady of the Condescension
Whisper as a wispy dove
Spirits rise from the friendly fire
Smoke from ash on altar of love

Tongues of flame sizzle against flesh
Lick and flicker ravenously
Her spirit gentle as the breath
Of a shadow on the sea...

© John Kennan 2012


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110011 10101 01010101 101101 10101010 00101101 11110101 1011111 111110010 11110101 11110111 11010101 1101111 1011111111 10111100 10101010010 1101010 1011101 101010010 00111101 1101010 10011101 1110011 111010 111110010 11110101 11110111 11010101 1101111 1011111111 10111100 10101010010 01011101 10110101 10110101 10110101 01111010 010101111 100110101 01111111 0100110010 1011111 11110100 1011011 111110010 11110101 11110111 11010101 1101111 1011111111 10111100 10101010010 101010010 1010101 101101010 11111011 11110011 10101 01010101 101101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,961
Words 368
Sentences 8
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 8, 4, 4, 8, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 61
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by rankstranger7 on May 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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