Analysis of At the Diner in Cincinnati, 1975
Jody Serey 1950 (St. Paul, Minnesota)
I eat my lunch with old women
to remind me who I am
under all this plumage
there are six or eight whose
faces occupy the spaces
in the little booths
but seldom more than four
smile to me when I walk in
they wear hats on their spider-web hair
and gloves on their spotted hands
purses and shopping bags burden them
they come to town to shop for
needles or for stout black shoes
and on holy days the communion rail
at the big church is lined with them,
mouths popped open
like baby birds
each one is a widow,
the half death cast back
into the dimming light and
the shadows of the children
the wedding rings twirl
where once the flesh was plump
“she is a man’s” was the message
when the fingers flashed with heat
and the children stirred
in each velvet belly
like poppy seeds in the rain
“she was a man’s” the thinning circles say,
still possessed by something dead
true to bones in Sunday suits
we drink tea, eat soup,
and I count out the change
for the gray-faced girl
who rattles cups
and drops the spoons
infirm magi, last Christmas
they brought their gifts to me
and among the offerings was
a handkerchief done in red,
silk thread saying “Miami Beach”
I waited for the one
who had handed me the box
to tell me why I held the bit of
cloth with a map and two words
done in stitches like a wound
my son, she said, brought this to me
she named that poppy seed,
the one who went to Florida,
the one who sent her money,
the one who died
and she had a telegram
about a soldier in Korea
I never went to Florida, but
I wept on Miami Beach
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Metre | 11111110 1011111 101110 111111 1010010 00101 110111 1111110 111111011 0111101 100101101 1111111 1011111 0110100101 10111111 1110 1101 111010 01111 0101010 011010 01011 110111 11011010 1010111 00101 011010 1101001 1101010101 1011101 111011 11111 011101 10111 1101 0101 0110110 111111 00101001 0100101 11100101 110101 1110101 111111011 1101011 1010101 11111111 111101 01111100 0111010 0111 011010 010100010 110111001 1110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,516 |
Words | 302 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 5, 3, 6, 6, 5, 3, 5, 5, 5, 7, 2 |
Lines Amount | 55 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 101 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
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