Analysis of Dama De Noche



I am a dull soul walking alone.
At night, I want to dance but afraid.
Some are behind the bushes,
wanted you to groan.
I want to be me but I don't want to 
be betrayed.

 'walking down here in the forest,
Hoping I can find a lair where I'll be freed.
You know they are unjust.
You know there are dogs full of greed.

A sweet scent woke me up, while
I opened my eyes and wandered,
My orbs meet the beautiful dancing lady of the night.
Her brightness overpowering the stars, pessimism backfired.

I hold my breath before I laughed.
I joyfully joined the flowers singing to the moon.
Hope this ain't just another witchcraft.
I know as I saw dama de noche giving me a nod.

The lady of the night mesmerizing me.
I saw how she glows in the dark like she's the only light.
When everything falls down, I shouldn't be an escapee.
When everyone's an enemy then shouldn't hold thyself to fight.

As the cold wind relaxes,
The lady of the night slowly stopped.
The sky slowly became lighter as the sun arises.
Her scent slowly fades away while my tears escaped and my heart dropped.


Scheme ABCAXB DEDE XFGF HXHX IGIG XJCJ
Poetic Form
Metre 110111001 111111101 1101010 10111 1111111111 101 10110010 10111011111 111101 11111111 0111111 11011010 11101001010101 01010100110010 11110111 1100101010101 11110101 11111101110101 0101011001 11111001110101 110111101101 11011001101111 1011010 010101101 01100110101010 0110101111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,045
Words 202
Sentences 20
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by euxaxu on May 25, 2021

Modified on April 13, 2023

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18 Ph. Been writing poems since I was 12. I can say my poems are not that good yet. I am open for criticism for I'm still learning and continue improving in Poetry. more…

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