Analysis of Falling tears



She was just hanging there
The rope never stopped
Her broken neck kept bleeding
From her wrists i knew her history
This child has never known freedom
The cracks down her lips
The bones visible on cheeks
This child has never known love

From below her swaying body
A letter so short every word shattered
My heart
" i had a mother
I had a father
I was the only one
But i wasn't what
He had dreamt
I wasn't "enough"
She had no voice
My mother you see
So i became his thing
... i became his thing"

"May he bless them with
A son"

... she was 14.


Scheme XXABXXXX BXXCCDXXXXBAA XD X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 01101 0101110 101110100 11110110 01101 0110011 1111011 10101010 01011100110 11 11010 11010 110101 11101 111 11001 1111 11011 110111 10111 11111 01 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 558
Words 110
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 13, 2, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Raynolds Moseamedi

Raynolds Moseamedi is a South African poet and a student in the University of Technology... more…

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