Analysis of The bird on the windowsill

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



The evening was cool and tranquil
The wish to augur well abound
The cigar on my lips nearing its peril
Thus holding it with my finger tips hard

Gazing through the window fastened
Gauging my life as a widower
‘Golly!’ what has caused the noise rend
Gaping in astonishment my mouth rounder

Perching on the window calmly
Pinky dove landed perfectly
Producing a muffled scuffle lovelily
Peering through the pane suspiciously

Constant peck of minute dust
Caressing the beak on pane last
Careful preening of feathers on crest
Clipping and arranging them best

Silently peering through the pane
Solutions form to quell my pain
Should I continue to lament days gone?
Sit in the agony of my love’s illusion?

Thanks to the lesson given in mute
Thoughts brought up to unite
The aching soul of mine, blest
The bird on the windowsill sit

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme ABAX XCBC DDAD XXEE FFXX XXEX X
Poetic Form
Metre 01011010 01110101 00111110110 1101111011 10101010 101110100 10111011 10001001110 1101010 10110100 010010101 101010100 1011101 01001111 101011011 10001011 10010101 01011111 1101010111 100100111010 110101001 11111 0101111 011011 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 828
Words 147
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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