Analysis of The Virginity Pen
JosephC.Guess 1983 (Arkansas)
Oh...
the temptation
that rushed
my emotions within
I just want to release
just a little squeeze
Never touched
it before
never felt it
with my hands
only seen it
using the vulnerable victims
who drowned
through curiosity
always imagined
my first time
would be with
something special
that I can share
maybe it will
make me feel better
maybe it does care
or it wouldn't be there
this moment with
those twin ears
of mines
have heard
of many first times
hope it doesn't hurt
releasing feelings
that penetrate too deep
opening up spaces
that was closed
or enjoying the pleasure
until it puts you to sleep
will it take me
to a world
where problems dissolve
make me smile
on mondays
while at my job
it started slow
carefully moving
while caressing my thoughts
in a rhythm
until it opens
the arousal
from each vision
the grit and the grind
going up and down
releasing wet ink
from the explosions
of beautiful thoughts
stroking left and right slowly
upon each line felt greater
hope I'm not too loud
disturbing others
from the
screams and squeaks
on the paper
as each thought
begin to intensify
it's all I dreamed
it would be
I said as I cried
is this why poets
become addicted
wanting to release
more and more
hope I don't
lose respect
giving it up
so early
and that easy
trying not to
walk by living room
coffee table
so it want tease me
that shiny
sexy thing
I want again
that's what happens
when you lose
your virginity
to a pen
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Metre | 1 0010 11 101001 111101 10101 101 101 1011 111 1011 100100010 11 10100 1010 111 111 1010 1111 1011 11110 10111 111011 1101 111 11 11 11011 11101 01010 11011 100110 111 1010010 0111111 1111 101 11001 111 110 1111 1101 10010 101011 0010 01110 0010 1110 01001 10101 01011 10010 11001 1010110 0111110 11111 01010 10 101 1010 111 011010 1111 111 11111 11110 01010 10101 101 111 101 1011 110 0110 1011 11101 1010 11111 110 101 1101 1110 111 10100 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 1,355 |
Words | 265 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 85 |
Lines Amount | 85 |
Letters per line (avg) | 14 |
Words per line (avg) | 3 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,150 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 265 |
About this poem
It's about people who begin to discover love in writing poetry for the first time.
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Submitted by josephg.40713 on June 02, 2021
Modified by josephg.40713 on June 03, 2021
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