Analysis of What have we done

Brian Bevels 1977 (Centre al)



People need to take heed
To the things that are going on.
Our Jesus is soon returning
And I believe it won't be long.

Every way you turn
You see death and destruction.
And life could be so much better
If we would just follow God's instructions.

He gave us the rule book
And told us of his plan.
How we should live our life by his
And to love our fellow man.

To often we get caught up
In the unrighteousness of this nation.
And I believe the Lord just drops his head
And says what are you doing to my creation.

Jesus is coming back
For a body tried and true.
Now ask yourself this question
Will be be coming back for you ?


Scheme XXXX XAXX XBXB XAXA XCAC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 101111 10111101 101011010 01011111 100111 1110010 01111110 1111101010 111011 011111 111110111 01110101 1101111 0011110 0101011111 011111011010 101101 1010101 1101110 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 604
Words 125
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on April 03, 2006

Submitted by bevels.brian on June 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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