Analysis of Amabilis

Jody Serey 1950 (St. Paul, Minnesota)



That February at school,
She heard her Lover’s voice,
Dreams darkened with His call
She sold her books and
Sent her cat home
To her sister

The convent door slammed shut
As she faced the other women
The rustle of His brides
The whisper of their shoes
Like prayers, or the
Wind outside her window

The laundry room her chapel
The wetness and the heat
As she did the work to
Earn His glance
His shroud mixed in
With sheets


Scheme XXXXXX XXXXXX XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 110101 110111 11010 1011 1010 010111 11101010 010111 010111 1110 111010 0101010 010001 111011 111 1110 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 406
Words 80
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is about a young art student who thought she heard a divine call to service as a nun.

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Submitted by jodyserey on June 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jody Serey

I have lived for four decades in the low desert in Arizona, after growing up in the Midwest. I have never not been a writer of one kind or the other. more…

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