Analysis of Sleep Demons



Another sleepless night-
that I’m not alright.
I’ve counted all the sheep-
constantly praying for sleep.

Soon I’ll start to drift away-
that’s when the demons come to play.
I try for help, stuck with silent screams-
why can’t this be a bad dream.

My mind will start to race-
one chants that in a waste of space.
Another makes me feel paralyzed-
I’m so tired, constantly feeling terrorized.

I think I’m close to death-
as they start to take my last breath.
They all suddenly go away-
I see the morning sun, time to suffer another day.


Scheme AABB CCXX DDEE FFCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 010101 1111 110101 1001011 1111101 11010111 111111101 1111011 111111 11100111 01011110 11101001010 111111 11111111 11100101 11010111100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 538
Words 98
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by Aaron.lthomas9 on June 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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