Analysis of Where do I Fit In?

Lene' Mumaugh 1961 (Billings, Montana)



Mommy's no longer with Daddy
And the house is up for sale
Where do I fit in?
No one can seem to tell

They keep pointing and seem
Worried about who gets the TV
No one seems to mention
What they're going to do with me

I look from one to the other
I love them both the same
They want me to choose
Is this a new game?

Mommy tells me that
She'll be marrying soon
There will be a new daddy
I don't like the sound of that tune.

There is only one daddy for me
He is the one I've always known
Since the first day here on earth
And will be until I'm fully grown


Scheme AXXX XAXA XBXB XCAC ADXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10110110 0011111 11110 111111 111001 100111011 111110 11101111 11111010 111101 11111 11011 10111 111001 1110110 11101111 111011011 1101111 1011111 011011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 533
Words 119
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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