Analysis of Depression, of the emotion series 1 of 27



Depression is an epidemic virus spreading faster then any other, and it is VERY painful, and often very difficult to escape.

Depression,
 you tell me that I shouldn't talk to people, and I follow your rules.
Depression,
you tell me that I should barely touch food at dinner time, and I comply
 Depression,
You order me to try and self harm every night, when I think no one is around to find out.
And I do
Depression,
You order me to grab a knife and cut my wrists, and watch the sweet blood flow, and so I do,

and as I lie there dieing, I wonder why I ever followed your rules, and think to my self oh well, to late now… and I let the darkness swallow me whole…


Scheme x AxAxAxbAb x
Poetic Form
Metre 0101101010101011010011101001010100101 010 11111101110011011 010 111111101111010101 010 110111011100111111101111 011 010 1101110101110101110111 0111111101110101101111111110110101011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 661
Words 130
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

Dont read if you get sad very easily or are offended easy. Also, this is an original poem.

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Written on July 09, 2020

Submitted by joeyjames32123 on July 03, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Joseph milberger

I'm 14, I've gone thru a lot in that time and I felt like it's a good idea to write it down soooooo.... Ya, working on the rest of the 27 human emotion pieces. more…

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