Analysis of You Finally Have a Name



A smile
dances
Across cheeks

When mentioned
Your name

Tempature rises
Hands shake
and

Pale complexion
Becomes a rosy red

Heart misses beat
and
Threatens
To leave chest

Anticipation rises
With
Euphoria not far
Behind

For the longest time
I spent
soundless

Day by day
Hour by hour
Without even a wisper

With such
loudness

Only to be found
In the very
sirens themselves

Screaming
unforgettable hymns

Echoing
through
Ear drums

Long thought dead

Your notes hit at
levels
never experienced
Before

Causing the ends of lips
To curve
And spread far

Accompanied
with the
Child like sense
Of wonder

Drip inner lobes
Till they soak
Stems of the brain

Neurons firing
Uncontrollably
This way and that

Bringing blood back into
A heart
I thought no longer beat

Shoulders
unburdened
Of weight

Chest
relieved
Of force

Time has finally
Blessed me with
The sense of sound

And the one thing
That unlocked it all

Was the key

Found in when
She finally spoke
Her name....


Scheme xax bc axB xd eBxf aghx xxa xih xa jkx lx lmx d nxxx xxh xxxi xox lkn mxe xbx fxx kgj lx k xoc
Poetic Form Tetractys  (63%)
Etheree  (24%)
Metre 01 10 011 110 11 110 11 0 1010 010101 1101 0 10 111 001010 1 010011 01 10101 11 1 111 10110 011001 11 1 10111 0010 1001 10 01001 100 1 11 111 1111 10 100100 01 100111 11 011 0100 10 111 110 1101 111 1101 1010 0100 1101 101101 01 111101 10 010 11 1 01 11 11100 111 0111 0011 10111 101 101 11001 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 924
Words 174
Sentences 2
Stanzas 25
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 2, 4, 4, 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 1, 4, 3, 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 1, 3
Lines Amount 70
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by jfgoldsgym on July 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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