Analysis of Your EyEs

Jay Martinez 1992 (Brooklyn)



I wish you can see
What I see, from my point of view
Your touch, gave me goosebumps
Lusting for your love, gave me a meaning
Them red heels, kept me chasing
 Your Lips I keep on tasting
 We shared love in every Kiss
 And found bliss in every sin
You was never there, but I seen you in all angles
The thought of you, keeps you near
My fear of being alone
Is what keeps you here, in my heart
The girl of my dreams, nobody can see
But I wish she can see what I seen
I found peace in your presence
One day we’ll meet again
Until then I’ll find you in my sleep
Like an angel you was sent to me
Feel like you was made from my rib
You was meant for me
I’ll never forget the vows, you said to me
Always remember the day we said I do
Since then it always been just us two
Your eyes never told a lie
Real love is hard to find
But in our memories is where we keep it alive


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 865
Words 185
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 662
Words per stanza (avg) 185

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Written on July 27, 2021

Submitted by Mjay70734 on July 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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