Analysis of prismatic colored eyes

john mckiernan 1953 (Australia)



step into my light sweet young child
you were golden and crimson blue velvet for a while
moon glow and a circle a daisy chain indeed
tiny hands are holding in complete harmony
around and around their wonderful world revolves
their circle of life is a story to be told
a song so beautiful the innocence of youth
if god gave it wings we could all find the truth
a daisy chain of children five colors and more
they gave me a rainbow and the key to a door.


Scheme ABCDEFGGHH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10111111 1010010110101 110010010101 101110001100 010011100101 110111010111 011100010011 11111111101 010111011001 11101001101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 452
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 363
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Submitted by johnm.66013 on July 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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