Analysis of One Last Kiss



Bikers riding by saw a woman about to leap
In a river, off a bridge, that was so very deep.
The leader went over, asked her what was wrong.
She said I am about to jump, my life is not too long.

Well this woman was pretty, just as pretty as can be.
The leader said before you do, please give a kiss to me.
So she gave him a kiss, spine tickling to the bone.
It was so good that it made, the biker leader moan.

He said that was the best, that I have ever been kissed
If you jump today, that talent surely will be missed.
Why is it you want to jump, his head still in a whirl.
Because she said my dad, won’t let me dress up like a girl.

Though it’s not for sure, all the facts still unknown
The police are thinking now that he was thrown.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF DD
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110100111 0010101111101 01011010111 11110111111111 1 11101101110111 01010111110111 11110111101 1111111010101 1 1111011111011 1110111010111 1111111111001 01111111111101 1 11111101101 00111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 735
Words 157
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 556
Words per stanza (avg) 157

About this poem

This was written about a joke that I heard, I think. I'm not 100% sure. It's been almost 4 years since I wrote it and I can't seem to remember the inspiration for this one.

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Written on December 07, 2017

Submitted by UJ on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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