Analysis of The struggle I went through in my life



I  was a very quiet and shy person,
And have limited friends,
All my classmates will bully me, antisocial person.

I start to  feel guilty,
I asked myself,
If I have limited friends means I will be a failure?
Is there any other way to overcome this?

I was also  feeling shy to express my feeling,
I used to stammer a lot when coming to discussion or presentation,
Most of my friends don't like to take me in their group,
They always try to avoid me.

What can I do to impove myself?
What other way can I do?

Now is 2021,
I prefer to change myself to be a positive person,
I upgrade myself to be bold and ignore negative people.

I also learn to be an extraordinary person by trying new talents,
It is by writing the poem.

My dream is to become one of the famous poem writers,
It's just a beginning I start to write my poem,
I feel blessed to get ideas from other poem writers and comment from them to upgrade myself.

Hope everything will be fine,
I pray to God to make my future beautiful and amazing as I start my new journey in poems and poetry,
That's all I ask for.


Scheme AXA BCXX XAXB CX XAX XD XDC XBX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100110 011001 111110101010 111110 111 11110011111010 11101011101 1110101101110 111100111010101010 111111111011 1111011 1111111 1101111 11 10111111010010 101111100110010 1101111010010110110 11110010 111101110101010 1100101111110 111110101101010010111011 110111 111111110100001011111100100100 11111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,046
Words 209
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

To make people know what struggle I went through in my life and what I did to overcome it

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Written on August 05, 2021

Submitted by on August 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ashywini Sathis Kumar

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