Analysis of ENTREPRENUER (BEST VERSION OF ME)

JaQuiondia Banks 1990 (MILWAUKEE, WI)



Entrepreneur (Best Version of Me)
They asked, “When you grow up, what would you like to be?”
I have always wanted to be a better version of me
I never had a role model, no one I looked up to, but me
Living out my goals and dreams, being in control of my own destiny
When I close my eyes, I will tell you what I see
Owning billions in real estate
Talking to millions on stage
Having my own cosmetic line
Wearing my very own fashion design
Having a chain of Lachѐ hotels
Owning multi-million-dollar franchises
Maybe my own home appliances
I will make Lachѐ a household name
So, when you see it, remember my name
A legacy is what I will leave behind
But my DYNASTY going to be a GOLDMINE
So, when you ask me, what I would like to be
My answer gone always be, a better version of me


Scheme AAAAAABCDDEFGHHIDAA
Poetic Form
Metre 00111011 111111111111 11110110101011 1101011011111111 101110110001111100 111111111111 10100101 1011011 10110101 1011011001 10011101 1010101010 101110100 1111011 1111101011 01001111101 11100101101 11111111111 1101110101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 767
Words 155
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 605
Words per stanza (avg) 154
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Written on May 28, 2021

Submitted by jaquiondiab20 on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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