Analysis of River and seas



I was born in a village in South Hunan,

There was a stream in front of my village.

A childhood paradise

Where I played and grew

With my brothers and sisters.

I moved South of Gansu, to the ancient city,

To attend school.

The Xi river flows nearby.

My after-school paradise

Where my play had no end.

Yet now, it is far away.

It do not know where it comes from.

But I know

It is just for me.

Later, I studied at Hunan University

On the banks of the Xiang River,

With its famous mountains, pavilions, and rivers.

I’m standing on Orange Isle,

Watching the gushing water surging northward

into the Yangtze River,

And my childhood heaven

I wander, and now

I live on this side of the sea

Where the waves are monstrous.

Yet there is still a ripple in my heart,

That flows like a stream,

Caressing the shores of my memory,

Leaving traces of love.


Scheme X X A X B C X X A X X X X C C D B X X D X X C X X X C X
Poetic Form
Metre 11100100110 1101011110 0110 11101 1110010 11111101010 1011 0110111 110110 111111 1111101 11111111 111 11111 101101100100 101101010 111010010010 1101101 10010101010 0101110 01110 11001 11111101 101110 1111010011 11101 0100111100 101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 831
Words 163
Sentences 12
Stanzas 28
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6

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Written on August 13, 2021

Submitted by matt_hu2002 on August 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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JUNFEI HU

Dr. JUNFEI HU, a Chinese poet, born in Hunan, China, on 24th October 1973. holding a PhD from the University of Leeds on 7th September 2010, published a book with Dr. Michael Williams in June 2018 with title " Life Story, Letters, and Poems of Hope, Love and Peace". more…

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