Analysis of Friends sorrows



As she sits there all alone

Just staring at her phone

Trapped inside her head

She just cannot help but think

As tears runs down her cheek

She cannot find the words to speak

From the crippling past

Friends that never sees

The pain that’s in her eyes

Friends that never sees

The tears running down her cheek

Friends that are not true

As running is all then do

She longs for someone’s hand

That time will withstand

As I sit there all alone

Just staring at my phone

Waiting for her voice

As she finds the words to speak

I just cannot help but think

I long for her hand

Hoping time will withstand

Wiping tears from her cheek


Scheme a a x b c c x D x D c e e f f a a x c b f f c
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 110101 10101 1110111 111101 11010111 101001 11101 011001 11101 0110101 11111 1101111 11111 11101 1111101 110111 10101 1110111 1110111 11101 101101 101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 605
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

Wrote this for my best friend. I wanted her to know that I will always be by her side. Love you CAW. We got this.

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Written on July 23, 2021

Submitted by jasonm.23211 on August 19, 2021

Modified by jasonm.23211 on August 19, 2021

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