Analysis of SOUL IN SOIL



Tha ,ekh pattar  mai v,
 subah suraj k kirno ne,
Sangh thand ke mahino ne
 To kabhi barsaat ki  mahino ne !

Sametaaa Aur ,samet  k rakh dea !
Mujhe bannta gayaa,
chote chote tukdon mein

Kuch der baaad kuch
  jiv mujh mein panapne lage
 aaaur to aur
Ye dhuup !ye pani! Ye  hawaa  !
Mujhe achhe lagne lage

Salo saaal aise hi chaltaaa rahaa
 Dhire dhire  ,mujh jaise beejaaan
Pe v , jivan  basne laaagaa!
Mai pattar se mittti banane laga!

Ugh khade hue mujh par hi van  aur vanaspattiyaa!
Wahaa se surwaaat hui enek jan aaur jaatiyaaa!
Phir aaaye insaan ,
aur unhone mujh par surwaaat kea  khetiyaaaa

Sab sahi chalne lagaaa thaa!
Bas mujhe ab aaghe
Yahi se, dar lagne lagaa thaaa!

Koi aaakar mujhe aaajmaaate
 Mujhse munaaafaa kaaamaa kar
Mujhe  banjar chhod jaaate!


Scheme AAAA ABC XDEXD XCFF BBCB GAG HEH
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111 11111 111111 1110111 111 1111 1111 11111 111 111111 1111 1011111 11111 11111 111111 111111111 111101111 111 1111111 11111 1111 1011111 1111 1111 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 745
Words 132
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 5, 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Submitted by pankajyadav9562 on August 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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