Analysis of While Standing Still



while standing still
mountains whisper
to the edge of clouds
and
we shall anchor our souls
to the kingdom of heaven
and
we shall
move through this world
with
the grace of God
while standing still


Scheme AbcDefDghijA
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1010 10111 0 1110101 1010110 0 11 1111 1 0111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 186
Words 36
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

We must submit and obey the will of God, to master the universe. Thus, I want to be a good servant, I sayeth unto the Lord, I will obey and hear His response, "well done my good and faithful servant...well done

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Written on September 03, 2021

Submitted by gregory_g on September 04, 2021

Modified by gregory_g on September 05, 2021

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