Analysis of Trinkets & Pebbles



The cost is your soul!  
Why would we dare to examine?
The cost is high and the pay out is great;
to reach the goal you must have faith.
Learn to console and play your role, no need to control your emotions, your emotions aren't the common goal.
Many have tried with victory so pure.
But few have achieved or can afford the local cure.
They say. "reach for the stars," to reach your dreams.
My G-d the stars are so far all I can do is scream.
Silver spoon, silver spoon, silver spoon, I beseech thee to find me.
Find me a crystal ball so I may be its trustee.
Golden Goblets, dreams of blue, why do we concentrate on the glamour of you?
Hurricanes, tornados, wild fires and more seem to be running rampant with gas balloons upping the Annie and running up the score.
On the loose with no-one to coral, I feel trapped underneath their paranormal galore.
So for me, I'll stick with old fashioned giving.
It will last longer than high cost of living.
Keep the faith our Creator is near.
No need to chase dreams especially with fear.
Chase your dreams with conviction and desire.
Glimmering light shine bright in our hearts.
Without your light you will surely sink.
So far away is the soul I think.
Go for the things within your grasp.
Grow, grow and grow 'til your truth lasts.
From this day forward you've been acquitted of the past.
It's Trinkets and Pebbles that most will see.
This life is pure hell and mostly a fallacy.
All we can do is live to love.
When we do that, it reaches the stars above.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111 11111010 0111001111 11011111 111001111110110101010100101 1011110011 1110111010101 1111011111 11101111111111 1011011011011111 110101111111 10111111110101011 1001110011111010110110010010101 101111110111011001001 11111111010 11110111110 1011001011 1111101011 11110100010 1001110101 011111101 110110111 11010111 11011111 1111011010101 1100101111 111110100100 11111111 11111100101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,481
Words 284
Sentences 29
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,170
Words per stanza (avg) 282

About this poem

It's the story of many as orchestrated by a few! Guidelines to follow with the victor always the victor. A poem of inspiration for some trying to figure out life itself. *Chase you dreams and not someone elses.*

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Written on September 04, 2021

Submitted by jmoviecritic on September 04, 2021

Modified by jmoviecritic on September 05, 2021

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Jay Lamont

The 3rd poem I've ever written. New to poetry and this forum. Hopefully, you enjoy it's intricate meaning. more…

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