Analysis of Darkness



I can no longer see the light ahead
I see sorrow sadness and nothing instead
It’s a familiar feeling I have been here before
I lack the strength to fight it anymore
I can no longer laugh or fake a smile
I can’t hide the tears as I did for awhile
Not really sure what I do from here
The past is gone and the future I fear


Scheme AABBCCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010101 11101001001 1001010111101 110111101 1111011101 11101111101 110111111 0111001011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 321
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 251
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Written on May 06, 2021

Submitted by janalt94 on September 09, 2021

Modified on March 27, 2023

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