Analysis of Dosage Fluctuates.



Their thoughts were as quiet to their maker as their voice was to their family.
Mortally they were sent back for being too naughty or nice; for God had unfinished thought only they could convey.
Not by my hands can I make them told
but I can try, each thought; and you can't win them all.
They washed their hands and thought of making it a lie, denying it, putting it down to hallucination.
That's where you came in I think!
Jesus, can you explain creation?
Again, God gave his explanation.


Scheme ABCDEFEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101110111111100 1001011110110111110101101101 111111111 111111011111 1111011101010101101110010 1111011 101101010 01111010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 483
Words 91
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 384
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

The mind is a delicate parting of the waters, a staff runs through it, but the synapse fires across it from time to time.

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Written on October 10, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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