Analysis of Awaken her heart

joanna scott 1967 (Birmingham)



Her heart it needs awakening
it's tired though asleep
her lips untouched her tears run dry
she know longer sits too weep
The dreams had stopped so suddenly
like you are no longer there
just a silent whisper
in a world, that's forgot how to care
You leave her alone and empty
you left her waiting around
your the reason she walked away
and he's the reason she's found


Scheme ABCBDEFEDGHG
Poetic Form
Metre 01110100 110101 01010111 1110111 01111100 1111101 101010 001101111 11001010 1101001 10101101 0101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 361
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 69

About this poem

I wrote this a few years ago about a love that never worked because he kept the girl waiting when she met some one new he couldn't understand why

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Submitted by Joanna1967 on September 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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